Brain-washed's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[a simple game]

it's alright, maybe add a small bonus zone around the edges where white dots can spawn to get an extra point, but if you get hit it speeds up the other white dots currently on the screen as well as stunning you.
just a thought

Raeino responds:

Thanks for the advice, it's a feature that could work, however my goal was to make this game as simple as possible (as much as it may seem like a joke considering how many times I used the word "simple"), even without power-ups, like a kind of Mario 64DS minigame :)

[Totaled Engine V1.04]

yeah it's functional but you need more than this. best of luck finishing

bfdifanlol responds:

Updated

[Gravitate]

it's really weird and nothing feels right but it probably just takes practice.
instead of true random placement for the portals, you could try making levels where you start at different points and the portals are in different spots so you can actually get a feel for how movement works. like, the first few levels you start in the middle and the portal goes to different spots, then the next few levels you start on one side or the top and you have to figure out how to move differently etc. after you get through the stages you can select a time attack mode to test your skills.
then the mode you have now could be a survival mode that has a newgrounds linked leaderboard so we can compete. and then maybe fix the true random and put an area the portal can't appear around so it doesn't just jump to the next level.

DMG-84 responds:

Great ideas. Thanks.

[cars and crashes]

it works, but since the car generation is truly random, it happens pretty quick where you are forced to lose. make something more complete and submit that. best of luck improving

edhsjiudhf responds:

I'm sorry, in my next games (if it gives me an idea on the subject of the games that I will do) I will not make that mistake.

[The Waylon Files V1.3 (BETA)]

shooting is extremely delayed and the attack speed itself makes this vert hard to complete since the aliens move so fast.
just complete the game and submit that.

TheInkyLand responds:

okay i will try to make the game better and try more things and try better i hope you understand
as i will update it i hope you enjoyed playing sorry for your experience.

[Lost Times ( ALPHA ) 1.2.1]

Not a clue as to what's going on, can't seem to take damage anyway. movement seems random and you just move backwards but I can't make sense of it.
just make something more complete and write out instructions.

TheInkyLand responds:

i know i understand and i will not be working on this game anymore

[Chase the Dragon Fly]

it's functional but needs a timer or something to make the score worth anything.

makostacksPro responds:

Thank you for the feedback this is the first web game I made so I thought I'd post it here to see what I can improve on.

[Bizarre Trials 3: END ME]

just gets an error and won't load

bfdifanlol responds:

Reload the page and dont scroll down.