looks like it'll be great if you can keep up with this style. looking forward to next madness day for this. don't rush it.
looks like it'll be great if you can keep up with this style. looking forward to next madness day for this. don't rush it.
Thank you, it means a lot! I’m nearly finished drawing it all on paper, and eventually I’ll color/refine it digitally then edit it all together.
it's ok, but things like this should go on the art portal as a gif instead if possible.
hm, maybe
woah
looks fantastic, can't wait for the rest
thanks! you can see more here: https://www.artstation.com/condepablo/albums/1847355
the effort is there, but it's very short. for things in the "short history" genre, you usually have 2 options, dense or funny. the best way to learn how to structure things like this (in my opinion) would be to watch history tiktokers. they're usually good at getting what they want to say out in a that limited time frame. you're on the right track here, but with no sound of any sort, it's kind of bland.
since this plays more like a slide show with some minor animation, you should try to make the text very clear and the backgrounds simple when giving info. when the animations come on, you throw in some jokes or something. like when the rocket goes to the moon, it's reasonable for everybody to know what that's trying to say, but "to the moon" might not really be clear for people who don't know about it. like, when it goes to the moon a good visual would be to have its chart showing it going way up in the background. (you can draw it yourself, but make it clear what the chart shows)
I do like the ideas tho, and I'm just being honest with my score.
okay I will be more effort in to my work and stufy people who are better and Yeah I will be adding sound from now on it is bland with out the sound. I love how it came out thou I had a whole lot of fun making it for sure. your review makes me want to get better thanks for reviewing it and I will take all the feedback in
the mouth movements are well animated, just not well synched. the shading is a nice touch though. much potential
Thanks for the criticism! next time ill make sure that the mouths sync up better
nice work tbh, liveswif is really hard to use. you still have a long way to go, but keep at it.
Hell yeah thanks man I really worked hard on it and I’m trying to improve my liveswif skills. Ima keep trying to improve thanks for the love!
no sound?
Just fixed it my bad
upload this to the art portal as a gif instead
Ok! :-D
nice, love this style.
Thank!
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real ones have square frames.
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