so it's not BAD, but it's just walking for 3 minutes and a strange ending. a long scene of seeing the same thing with no other pov or explanation gets old fast. this could be 4 minutes shorter and cover the same ground. making it lengthy to give the sense of how long her journey is doesn't work here either since there's not much scenery change.
the animation itself is fine, you'll improve that over time. best of luck finishing this story