Brain-washed's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Falling Rock]

nice for your first time. keep it up

[Elementarians - Teaser]

woah
looks fantastic, can't wait for the rest

CondePablo responds:

thanks! you can see more here: https://www.artstation.com/condepablo/albums/1847355

[Night of the Hunter]

really cool, but kinda confusing. it's styled like an early rpg on pc.

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retrofuturism is cool

[CatBunny]

keep it up man. this is pretty good for 2 months. animation is smooth but has a unique flow, story is nice. has funny moments.
well done, looking forward to seeing more from you.

[quick history of dogecoin made in liveswif]

the effort is there, but it's very short. for things in the "short history" genre, you usually have 2 options, dense or funny. the best way to learn how to structure things like this (in my opinion) would be to watch history tiktokers. they're usually good at getting what they want to say out in a that limited time frame. you're on the right track here, but with no sound of any sort, it's kind of bland.
since this plays more like a slide show with some minor animation, you should try to make the text very clear and the backgrounds simple when giving info. when the animations come on, you throw in some jokes or something. like when the rocket goes to the moon, it's reasonable for everybody to know what that's trying to say, but "to the moon" might not really be clear for people who don't know about it. like, when it goes to the moon a good visual would be to have its chart showing it going way up in the background. (you can draw it yourself, but make it clear what the chart shows)
I do like the ideas tho, and I'm just being honest with my score.

elbarto66 responds:

okay I will be more effort in to my work and stufy people who are better and Yeah I will be adding sound from now on it is bland with out the sound. I love how it came out thou I had a whole lot of fun making it for sure. your review makes me want to get better thanks for reviewing it and I will take all the feedback in

[my source is that i made it up]

the mouth movements are well animated, just not well synched. the shading is a nice touch though. much potential

Eddieaimations responds:

Thanks for the criticism! next time ill make sure that the mouths sync up better

[Dicknose Episode 01]

his tongue sticks out A LOT for some reason

[freddy freaker]

i'm a freaky freaker yeah
you're a freaky freaker yeah