Brain-washed's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Spooky Skokkie]

that text scroll is unbearable bro.
so the camera keeps you in the bottom left corner, the issue is that creates a lot of leaps of faith. the camera shouldn't move up until the character moves above a certain height. if you try to backtrack, you get no vision and just have to spam shoot if you missed something since you can't see.
centered cameras are a lot easier to work with esp for games that aren't fast paced or require a lot of forward thought.
looks pretty good though, the characters look the best, the interior looks fine, the enemies need some work.
best of luck finishing

[Bizarre Trials 3: END ME]

just gets an error and won't load

bfdifanlol responds:

Reload the page and dont scroll down.

[Purgatory]

yeah make the full version and submit that. this can go somewhere but you need more than this. best of luck finishing.

[HIGH SPEED KARTING]

it's alright.. but you need to tell what the controls are somewhere.

[We need wifi]

game ends way too fast, like I barely understand what's happening at all even when the game lasts longer than 5 seconds. I think you hover over the people to steal their wifi and avoid the red bullets. but like, the people disappear so fast and usually before they can reappear, the game is over.
you've got something here, but it needs work, best of luck finishing

[Davis's Balloon Pop Mania Vol 1 Crude Edition]

it's functional, but the black balloons make it really hard to play the game right since they can end your run in 1 hit. also, volume mixing. the sfx on balloon popping is way too loud

SuperDavisDon responds:

Well, I am getting better at making games. So I want to update it?.. But I have to move on to my fourth game in my continuous game dev pipeline. My old game dev pipeline had unfished games or never completed? But these three, the Pinball, cannonball, and balloon pop, are my new game dev pipelines. So right now, I have a knack to move to my fourth game about a game of wack-a-moles.

It's so sad that the reviews are lower than my other games in my new game dev pipeline. :( But oh well. At least I complete making progress. :) :D

But thank you so much for the feedback. So are the connect buttons are working on the web? But is it working on the phone and PC? Hmm, maybe I need to fix it after making five games? Right now, this is my 3rd game.

[OviVixen: Newgrounds Edition 1.0]

make customizable controls or something, my left arrow key doesn't work so I can't win lol
game seems cool though

OviManic responds:

Do you mean the typical arrow keys or the [<] [>] keys between the [M] and the [?] ? Because the game uses the latter than the former. I’ll add an alternative control method once I fully implement the API.

Update: Now you can set control inputs by clicking on the title screen.

[The immortal mercenary]

it's functional... kinda, but there's not much to it. enemies don't even hit you the just circle around you. if he's immortal, why would people try to attack him. immortal merc sounds like a cool idea in a way, but you really need a story and build up. this just isn't it. best of luck improving

fi0k responds:

im creating a story for the character and in the future i will release it but for now i can do this because this is one of my first games