you're on the right track, but this has 0 sauce. keep improving
you're on the right track, but this has 0 sauce. keep improving
Alright, what can I do to improve?
not bad. your first time?
yeah, first time
3 stars bc the face matches exactly the face I made.
Oh.
the way the transition bits at the 10 second marks are similar but change as the song changes is sick. overall sound is pretty nice.
the first 10 seconds are kinda crazy tho, never really heard something like that before. it gets backgrounded as the song goes but you can still hear it thoughout.. or maybe i'm just hearing stuff, but it's still cool.
lyrics are good but the fuck kill consume is kinda cringe lol, even if it does fit
rly appreciate this feedback. def gonna return 2 the first 10 seconds sooner now, maybe before the drop. and sorta disagree/agree re: cringe? i feel like a lot of our fav stuff rides that line of just being so godawful but honest u know
work on mixing, so much clipping and muddiness.
not too bad tho
actually a lot of the clipping still fits within EQ parameters, just purposely done so for an effect (read the description for more on that)
top 10 rappers eminem is afraid to battle
but fr, this is actually not bad.... at all. clearly inspired by classic slim shady. the effort put into writing was high, and your rhyme schemes popoff kinda hard. plus it's hilarious
could you post the lyrics?
i need a dime
not no nine outta ten
i gotta spit my sick rhymes
out of a pen
go back in time, kill dre, and ill sign eminem
with a mind full of sick rhymes (scratch) and synonyms
im wearing a gas mask in the backseat of a taxi
im ready to blast off so yea don't even ask me
relax G, this is what happens when a colombian raps
i shove a couple of snacks up in ya fallopian tracks
i got pulled over for tryna speed over the limit
he said i smell weed,
“haha wanna hit it?”
he tried to arrest me, i had no choice but to stab his spleen
drag him back to the house hose him off on the trampoline
its sad to see, such a good officer go
and thats a true story yo, no not off the top of the dome
next pig to pull me over needs another cop on the phone
wish he had, cause i feel bad if my victims rot all alone
id get them outta the bag, but they're in too many pieces
plus i love my dog so i feed him whatever he pleases
he feasts on some flesh, i munch on some reeses
and tell my sisters it was diseases that killed my nieces
to be real witchall, im sick of the amateur rhymes
imma pop off at the jaw with sumthin to damage your minds
im one of them ill rappers with a mind full of sickshit
and a briefcase full of crucifixes and lipstick
yea, i gotta satisfy my cravings
so i ate the ribs of like five live babies
im on period, so fuckings one thing we cant do
don't worry bitch, ill just suck the blood out with with a vacuum
i get too fucked up, and accidentally snort liquor
get naked, and cover my face with a target store sticker
come over for dinner, you can invite your sister
stick my feet in ya pussies, wear ya like some slippers
im not a human, im a beat in a body
possessed by demons who lace my weed with bacardi
so when i party,
i aint tryna stick my dick
in a trick with a rep,
for being quick to hit
and easy to get
ive seen too many jits gettin sick from this shit
and witnessed images on the internet
of sick kids with twisted little ligaments
ya risked it, ripped it now your inna predicament
seconds 0-6 were good
as soon the guitar got electric it became bad.
i agree
Almost Perfect no joke
Very amazing Job, all that needed to be changed is the notes need more definition to them. IT all sounds slurred, unless that is what you were going for?
Naah, I kinda get what you mean. Thanks! :D
NEVER EVER FOR EVER NEVER
Try to make a mix to Gerudo Valley. It is the Ultimate peak in Musical perfection. Any sort of change will mess it up to complete destruction. Sorry F- for you. :(
Then why did you look at it? Its not that bad is it? xD lol thanks anyway? :o
B Tech
the best flick club player.
read my thoughts on the voting system in my post "Voting vs Quality" it's a bit rough but I think it says what I want to say. lets talk about it.
real ones have square frames.
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